22 A- Elevator Pitch No. 3
I don't believe that any feedback is silly feedback. I try to use all of the feedback that I receive to better myself in these posts. This being said, I had a comment that illuminated me to the fact that I had never discussed the price of my bike system. In this post I included a price, however it is based off of limited knowledge of the market.
Hi Jakob! Great elevator pitch. Very short and concise. I like that you showed why students can benefit from having this system. Maybe just really show why you're different than other bike renting companies.
ReplyDeleteThat was a very good elevator pitch. Very concise and direct to the point. I am on-line student therefore, I have not seen the campus yet but I can not believe that the bike system has not being implemented yet. I think you should go for it before citybike arrives and take the opportunity.
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