17 A- Elevator Pitch No. 2
I felt that all of the feedback that I received on my first pitch was helpful. The feedback that I received enlightened me to the fact that I failed to differentiate my idea from other substitutes. I ended up using the feedback to improve my second pitch and ensure that in it I differentiated my business from other substitutes.
Hi Jakob! Great elevator pitch. Very short and concise. I like that you showed why students can benefit from having this system. Maybe just really show why you're different than other bike renting companies.
ReplyDeleteThat was a very good elevator pitch. Very concise and direct to the point. I am on-line student therefore, I have not seen the campus yet but I can not believe that the bike system has not being implemented yet. I think you should go for it before citybike arrives and take the opportunity.
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