22 A- Elevator Pitch No. 3

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I don't believe that any feedback is silly feedback. I try to use all of the feedback that I receive to better myself in these posts. This being said, I had a comment that illuminated me to the fact that I had never discussed the price of my bike system. In this post I included a price, however it is based off of limited knowledge of the market. 


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  1. Emily Dulberg19 July 2020 at 18:19

    Hi Jakob! Great job editing your pitch to give the audience all the information needed to go and buy tomorrow. Price is really important when thinking about buying a particular item/service. I believe your system is what UF needs!!

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  2. KayleeHoller19 July 2020 at 23:47

    Hi Jakob. Your pitch was great! You had a good pitch and seemed interested in what you were talking about. It did appear at times you were reading so if you were able to memorize this speech more and present it off the top of your head it would make the pitch more engaging and effective for the listener. I’m glad you took feedback and incorporated it into your final pitch. Overall great job.

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