17 A- Elevator Pitch No. 2
I felt that all of the feedback that I received on my first pitch was helpful. The feedback that I received enlightened me to the fact that I failed to differentiate my idea from other substitutes. I ended up using the feedback to improve my second pitch and ensure that in it I differentiated my business from other substitutes.
Hi Jakob,
ReplyDeleteI think your pitch was awesome. It had a good hook and you did a great job explaining your business. You mentioned the benefits and the ease of use. You appeared comfortable and did not appear as if it were scripted. Your pitch seemed very natural and was interesting and held my attention. The only thing I could thing that you may want to possibly add is pricing, because college students all care about the cost. Overall great job!
Hi Jakob! Great job on the elevator pitch!! I think you did a great job addressing all the aspects of your business and after watching I have a better idea on what you are trying to do. You did a great job making eye contact with the camera and being enthusiastic! I think many people at UF and other big colleges would benefit from your transportation idea! Good job overall!!
ReplyDeleteHi Jakob!
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your elevator pitch! I think that you did a great job laying out all aspects of your business and how Universities would benefit from your idea. I think that you have a really great idea here that has potential on a large scale. Great work!